The Burning Fire

It is welldone and meaningful. You are always a good poetry. The more you write, the more you minimize sadness and it is more beautiful as you. I always love you...you are my best friend! Take care Nilima!

Lots of Love,

Sarvina

Keep writing :)

Love

This is fantastic.............what an awesome creation!!!!!!!!! its very very beautiful.......

Nilima,
How beautifully you have articulated courage and confidence by writing a poem. In fact I am an admirer of your poems and more specifically, I am very much immersed by the last two lines of your poem

..................................... Will that fire remain burned?
Or it will keep on burning me for long????

In my opinion, fire in you might be the SELF REALIZATION which is making you strong enough to accept the challenges in life. When fire (self realization) with in us is in the positive form such as love, kindness, continuous hard work, forgiveness, helpful, dedication, positive thinking and deeds, patient, than the fire(self realization) will surely be supportive towards our journey to success. But if the fire (self realization) with in us is in the negative form such as ego, hate, revenge, suspicion, self centered, pride, anger, than the fire will be disastrous. It will not only destroy us but will also destroy our surroundings one day.
In fact our dream or successes are not the destiny; rather they are voyages that go on and on. When one dream is achieved, we will start chasing another dream and new voyage automatically starts one after another as long as we are alive. Most important is that we must be always thankful to our parents, teachers and friends who made us strong enough to chase and capture our dreams. Another truth is that as life goes on and on eventually, one day we will surely be thankful to people who mocked at us, who irritated us, who betrayed us and enjoyed our failure because their deeds have sharpen our understandings towards the world we live in, made us strong and enlightened to walk on the highway success in a more efficient way.

Love and regards
Ramu

Dera Nilima ji

Wondeful.....eyah sun-light and moon-light both are precious..great poem. Keep it up burning and equally cooling your surroundings ..hehehe

With warm/cool regards
Bhanu