A life poem
I have to give my best to achieve what they want
If not today, i am sure i'd get it tomorrow
I would do whatever i can even if some memories are there to haunt
just to minimize my family's sadness and sorrow
What i must do is all up to me
other's can judge me all they can
this spectrum of aim that i have to see
so that happiness and peace go hand in hand
I see my luck as an unfortunate magic
hundreds of lies to make it more pretty
i hate to point out the graveness in this logic
and much somber this enchantment to be
Years and years i would live to tell this tale
with each growth a new beginning of the same
How am i suppose to make it simple and clear
that i was not born to play this dangerous game
Now i would stop saying and start to listen
if not today,i would get it some day
i am not sure the technique would help in my mission
but all in all, i would do it anyway.
I am not at all good in poetry and i am not sure this looks like one , but here it is and i hope you understand it.









Comments
i didnt knew the other side
i didnt knew the other side of yours. It is simply awesome.I discovered your one more talent.
Well done trip ..
Keep it up
Peace
Pooza
Don't make me embarrass
Don't make me embarrass. others might laugh. It's a bad poem, just thought of putting it on pulse wire because i have'nt been updating for some time.
Tripti
None will laf instead they
None will laf instead they will praise your poem.Gud that u posted this poem in Pulsewire for others to see
Peace
Pooza
Thanks for sharing you poem.
Thanks for sharing you poem. It takes a lot of courage to share our creative selves. I know I'm a writer myself!
thank you
thank you for liking..really appreciate you reading my poem.
Your words...
...are powerful and poignant, Tripti.
Continue your spirited work, dear sister.
Love and peace,
Pushpa
I m so sorry i missed your comment
I m so sorry i missed your comment and replying so late...thank you for the compliment dear Pushpa!!